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RE: In His Shade: A Fifty Word Story
Very well worked @bex-dk... In the shade of Father, running in the shadow of the wagon and the artwork of the shadow all convey the theme expertly... In 50 short words, you have me worrying and caring about your central character Ruth already.. Excellent job.
You missed one. The looming Brother John into whose shade her father would have transferred her...
But thank you. I wasn't sure if that part would come through.