Fireflies - Chapter 17
Thank you for being a part of the journey! If you'd like more Fireflies - contact me in discord! I'll be happy to point you in a new direction!
Always, Dreemie
dreemsteem#0695
Thank you for being a part of the journey! If you'd like more Fireflies - contact me in discord! I'll be happy to point you in a new direction!
Always, Dreemie
dreemsteem#0695
Ohhhh, so thats where Bryd has been... oh nooooo... omg soo many thoughts going through my head right now. So we know who hes trying to get to, and when they had that "explosion" between them a few chapters ago, and last weeks chapter... was that him trying to find Talia after he felt that??? Hmmmm Another awesome freaking chapter Dreemie!!! I can not wait till wednesday!!!!
Do I have your mind racing???? Lololol
If so...
I LOVE IT!!! 🤗
O.M.Gosh yes!!!! More chapters!!!!!! Hahahaha
hahahahaha in just 2 more days, my pretty! hehehehe
A correction, for your original:
You go from 'can' to 'could' and it jars abit. I think the last should also have been 'can'
You're right - that could be better suited there. Darn. It's after the 7 day editing time frame hehehehe but as you say - for the original ;)
Thank you @arthur.grafo!!!
Nooo. Poor Bryd- i was wondering if someone else was contolling him. Watch out Talia!!
This was a sad one for me to write!!!
The last sentence... Ughhh killed me!!
I knew it!! Aria was really a monster in disguise!! SO OBVIOUS!
hahahaha.... well I guess that's one interpretation.... LOLOL
I never would have guessed that's what was happening to Bryd! Now my next wondering - is this the same protagonist from the last chapter, or do we have two? I'll have to wait and see.
I love writing in surprises that catch my readers off guard!!!!! :) Next chapter.... Wednesday!!! :)
(i can't wait to meet you someday @kiwideb) hehehehehe
The plot thickens!! 😊 wishing you blessings @dreemsteem 😊
Hi @happysmileyman!!!! :) Blessings received and returned my friend! :)
Well...fudge.
ROFLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL....... one of the greatest movies hehehe
All caught up. Covered 9 chapters today and glad I ended with this one, can't wait until Wednesday the new guy is really nice I hope is not stupid though. Battle Royal.
Byrd does not stand a chance on his own though. I am not sure if I missed something but how did he reprogram the parents. He is quite strong/skilled having the glow world affect the real world then.
the glow world!!!!!!! LOLOLOL
the light that affected both worlds.... that was through Talia and Bryd together :) not the new man.
You didn't miss how he reprogrammed the parents. It wasn't explained in this chapter ;)
pen..... i LOVE that you did 9 chapters at once! hahahahahahaa and i also can't wait for Wednesday! :)
I mean that he is able to use that power to reprogram the parents, since I think he has been there once before, drained his "connection" found that he is able to take that from others, but he needs someone truly strong to cross over completely ... Just how I explain it to myself :)
Hehehe... You're on the right path!!!! I won't tell you how though.... Lololol
I'm trying not read any comments! Haha Hope you had a great day!
Hahahhaha yes don't!!!!! Lolol there are too many clues 😂😂😂😂
Such a crazy busy day... We have to catch up!!!!
Now I feel bad for being angry with him lol, poor thing...
Petra!!!! do you know.... THAT is what I was thinking!!!
I was like - oh no - when Petra finds out that he couldnt help it.......
LOLOLOL
but don't feel bad! you were just protecting Talia ;)