Fractured Words: Spoken Word Poetry
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This was my impromptu submission for @nyarlathotep fractal writing contest #6. I came third in the contest and I have decided to do a spoken word poem of the submission.
I do not know how it sounds like because I am scared to listen. The poem is a bit fractured and I do not really know what themes it seeks to express but you might be able to help me.
FRACTURED WORDS
A droplet; a child of a drip;
Liquid world gliding to a stop
Full with dust, fungus and tiny worlds
Building stars and flower bulbs
Amidst terraced spaces and mazes
Lost but for the lust of life
Singing between the veins of every tier.
Fractals; fractured lenses viewing
A drip drop of water dropping
From a broken sky, from heaven.
Nature rebuilding after the war;
Fireflies fractured into lightbulbs
And bright gases exploding like fireworks,
Like meteors crashing, clashing
Like a war just beginning.
Pictures broken like frames, glasses
After a fight; a drop of tear holding germs,
Regrets, dust and fears; imploding
Exploding; implying pain, withholding relief.
Picture’s perfect; beautiful rendition
Of broken pain and a new world.
The image cover was gotten from the the contest prompt. You can join this week's contest here
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Friend i have also written some poems but that are in my mother toungue marathi because i belongs to maharashtra ie country india...!!please upvote and follow me friend.
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wow... only wished i could write poetry... i would have emulated you...
Great one @warpedpoetic
Cheers!...
Thanks @jayboss. You definitely have some skill ghat I would kill for. Thanks for stopping by. Peace
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Read, but not listened to either, I have a lot of votes to go, so thanks for the word post too.
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I really liked this poem, @warpedpoetic. The voice recording is not bad, but maybe a little fast. It could just be that I like to have a little more time to process what I am hearing. I didn't have the words open in front of me to read while listening, and that would have helped.
Cheers!
Yeah, I agree with you. I was worried about the speed too. The thing was I didn't know what mood or tone to use. The poem was just fractured; like pieces of a mirror or picture scattered all over the place. Definitely not one of my better works.