[poetry] Riding the BEAST -- An original background Score By- dpatcher

in #dsound • 7 years ago (edited)


On the lonely rocky way...
Stopped at the end.

I checked my pocket
Found nothing, except a broken hour!
Filled with only dying life.
Beast lurked behind,
Blood rushed.
Ears started to burn.
Ravine blocked path ahead.
Beast growled, jumped
Leapt high as mountain.
broken hour slipped
hit the ground smashing into pieces.
Bloody eyes gazed the hour
Dying life ended.

Smiled, winked at the broken hour
Turned away and started life from the other side of ravine

Poem from - Dpatcher


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     7 years ago 
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       7 years ago 

      Nice piece
      my lover
      You bring peace
      Like no other
      Caring like a mother
      Hard-working like a father
      I won't turn on you
      Always return for you
      Lasting love endless trace
      White or black?
      Love has no race.

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       7 years ago 

      admire theses lines.. especially last 4 lines.

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       7 years ago 

      Thanks so much.

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         7 years ago 

        Poetry may be a nice attempt but music is beautiful and cinematic.

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         7 years ago 

        Appreciate you comment

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         7 years ago 

        Thanks man,excellent track.
        Nice poetry on nostalgia of life.

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        thanx for your support

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        This post has received a 1.36 % upvote from @drotto thanks to: @dpatcher.

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          This post received a 2% upvote from @morwhale team thanks to @dpatcher! For more information, click here! , TeamMorocco! .

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