Funny Little Bro
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A friend of my told me this story.
He said;
After dinner one night, his mom asked his younger brother Dare to get a broom from the backyard so she can use it to sweep.
His brother groaned and said, "But it's dark out there, I'm afraid."
So his mom told Dare, "It's Ok, God is with you." Dare gently opened the door and said, "God, if you are out there, please hand me the broom!"
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This post has received a 0.11 % upvote from @drotto thanks to: @banjo.
Funny joke! Well done. Nice call to action for your audience! Great rewards offer. Critique. A little more time on formatting. Here, your line spacing could be improved upon, also, someone shared a tip for justifying text so you get nice sidelines, but I don't recall what tag you use in your markdown. That might help. Also, you don't have to use Dolphinschool as your first tag. Humor, or funny might get better results, Nice job! Looking forward to more!
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I wouldn't offer to give away any of your hard earned SBD. It's hard enough accumulating some SP without giving some away. It won't attract readers anyway because they won't see it if they don't click through. Do you know how to power up your SBD?
As well as Mark's comments about formatting, I'd suggest making the post a little bit longer, maybe by giving a little background on the story eg what country it's in, what the neighbourhood is like, how old Dare is. The story is amusing, but you could make it more satisfying to the reader by helping them to really see it.
You could also add one more picture if it was a bit longer. Then people would feel like the post is more substantial, and more worth a vote. Remember Mark saying to only vote if you think it'd worth it? I don't agree with that entirely, but a lot of people are very choosy about what they upvote.
Good luck, and DO NOT give me any of your SBD :-)
Okay, thanks. Will work on that and see if i could add more lines.
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