My meaningful comment = some tips
I wouldn't offer to give away any of your hard earned SBD. It's hard enough accumulating some SP without giving some away. It won't attract readers anyway because they won't see it if they don't click through. Do you know how to power up your SBD?
As well as Mark's comments about formatting, I'd suggest making the post a little bit longer, maybe by giving a little background on the story eg what country it's in, what the neighbourhood is like, how old Dare is. The story is amusing, but you could make it more satisfying to the reader by helping them to really see it.
You could also add one more picture if it was a bit longer. Then people would feel like the post is more substantial, and more worth a vote. Remember Mark saying to only vote if you think it'd worth it? I don't agree with that entirely, but a lot of people are very choosy about what they upvote.
Good luck, and DO NOT give me any of your SBD :-)
Okay, thanks. Will work on that and see if i could add more lines.