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RE: DnW Poetry Contest #3: THE FALLING LEAF
Noted. What do you mean by:
...it will be much better if both lines will compliment with each other...
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Try to synchronized each end words with same tone...
I will definitely take your suggestion when I will write my next poem. Salamat @dianargenti
You're so nice for commenting on this post. For that, I gave you a vote!
Ayy tanawa ra lines diay na ako na suwat! Stanza mn gud unta hehehe Doo lagi ko maayo bga kritiko! I mean dli kaau sila maglagyo sa una nga stanza how can I put it "let's say they both have same beauty before nimo sila bulagon." Ayyy unsaon lisod hahaha