POETRY DICE CONTEST 2 - Mystical Appeal

in #dice7 years ago

In your eyes
Magic lies
Wands wave
And doors spring agape
At commands of hidden keys
The arrow
Leaves the bow
To follow
Desperately
That magnetic pull
Until the heart is pierced
Sweetly, swiftly
And with love
Baptising us
In a fountain
Full of tears
Shed by the world
Lovesick for the sun


Thanks for reading! If you liked this one you should check out some of my other poetry:
https://steemit.com/poetry/@elementm/words-mia-original-poetry
https://steemit.com/poetry/@elementm/original-poem-one-day-i-ll-learn-to-name-these

Or if you'd like to hear me sing you can check these out:
https://steemit.com/openmic/@elementm/open-mic-week-33-the-sign-by-ace-of-base
https://steemit.com/openmic/@elementm/open-mic-week-32-halo-by-beyonce

Steem on!


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Beautiful. I restreemed it emdiately

Thank you :)

That's a really good one, I'll have to check out your previous stuff. You've got a new follower.

Thanks, I just checked out 'The Shift'. Followed!

Sigh, looks like neither of us won. For what it's worth, I think yours was the best of the bunch. Mine being a close second, of course, lol.

I didn't even see the announcement lol. How about I turn mine into a chart-topping song and you turn yours into a best-selling novel and one day we'll both look back on the contest that started it all? But first, a quick power-sulk :(...okay I'm done :)

Yeah, I didn't see an announcement either, I just happen to notice a comment and the 50 steem transfer to one of the other contestants.

Sounds good, lol!

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Thanks (and sorry about your recent misfortune)

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