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Are you fiending for some good fiction? Have you caught poetry? I got the cure for you....
Face to face
Curled in a ball
Refracted so many times there's no color left at all
Tumble down by @ifoundnoel is just... I'm sorry, but READ THAT LINE. The pain just emanates from it, and it's beautiful and crazy well-thought out- I would give my right arm to write that line. More people need to read this steemian's work. Like, right now.
You are just an ordinary girl
So don’t you ever say
You are special.
To A Girl With Low Self-Esteem by @belle22 is interesting in that it communicates two different messages depending on the direct you read it in. On the first read, top to bottom, there is pain, then redemption as you read it again from bottom to top. An interesting technique.
However, having originated from a patriarchal society, it appears that the poem Give Me a Minstrel's Seat has some elements of male chauvinism embedded in it. In this regard, the poem stresses that women are nothing without men.
Male Chauvinism in African Traditional Poem by @gandhibaba is an interesting analysis of a type of poetry that some of our more western reader might not be familiar with- I was fascinated by his take!
Salacious serpents
Scorch my tongue
Time the grand illusion
My life undone
Shattered Redemption by @antithesis is uses rhyme and a staccato rhythm to explore the creative process.
This world has moved on.
The groan of fading echoes
Escape into the dying sky.
You can see the pillaged moon
The World Has Moved On by @warpedpoetic explores the impact we have on the planet. I am especially impressed with his word choice- I love that image created by "the pillaged moon".
Grief stripped him of relief
Saw a life full of deceit
His heart's about to rip
What is Left After Grief by @vegaron makes strong use of diction to create a sense of deep heartbreak.
Pull-quotes and images are sourced from their respective posts
Reflections are by Sunravelme
Thanks @sunravelme for curating my work. It creates the feeling of validation in me. I am grateful. I hope to come your way again.
Cheers!
Thank you for curating my poem @sunravelme. I appreciate my verses appearing on your curation posts. It means a whole lot to me.
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My heartfelt congratulations to the 🏆🎉🏆 @sunravelme for winning the prompt contest held by @bennettitalia
Excellent piece of work friend.
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