Working Title (MSP Creative Writing Curation)

as long as you play as fallen angel
you can pretend they’re never gone
close your eyes forever and dream

Winterfall by @socraticyoga has some gorgeous ideas that just need a tiny bit of refining. But the use of juxtaposition, the similes, the imagery... Winter has fallen indeed, because I have goosebumps!

When the anchors of old ships are furrowed
and the albas of new stories shine
I have nothing left: more than the flow of the wind
and the perhaps of every dream

Breakthrough by @zaxan is perfectly reflected by the image he used above. The ending reverberates.

While I struggle
To comprehend
How I possess
More in my chest
Than all the wealth
The earth could bear

That Artist No One Saw by @rubenalexander has a stunning sense of rhythm and his use of alliteration for emphasis is on point.

Whispering on college stairs, saying things with fingers crossed
seeing a camera in my hands, I can't forget the way you posed
that long drive on a foggy day, and dance under the blue sky
u loved d way i drew u close, and the next move just left u shy

I Love You by @lucky14 has some lovely imagery, once you get past the grammar. They claimed that it is also a song, so I'll be interested to see if they put it to music someday!

A lone flower in a caged garden
Seeking freedom, towards heaven
But the flowers root ran deep
And the price for freedom's steep

A Lone Flower by @vegaron is interesting in that it uses a symbol of a flower in the garden to discuss the problems of leaving a person's comfort zone.

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