Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #20

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esta es mi entrada, el día de hoy. en tan grandioso concurso, es un placer para mi estar participando saludos a mi amigo @f3nix

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Black Star

at that moment, they understood that the battle was just beginning and is not over by the whole. the potion he had swallowed, Xarag, was taking effect in its entirety; powers unimaginable as spirits of the more aya. they took control of him, and seized his being, soul and spirit, the creepy cry was a sign that his power was majestic, ran through his veins, not blood but a green gel that burst his heart, for revenge; demanding total destruction and thirst for revenge.

quickly, the commanding officer groups his army, which still did not come out of his astonishment. and he plays his war trumpet for the attack, when they reach the place where the cries of imminent power came from, four flashes of light from an electrified cloud came out, four apocalyptic horsemen descending. that was the counter-attack team that only Xarag needed, to exterminate them once and for all.

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many soldiers of the battalion, stepped back, amazed by the roar that caused the arrival of these riders, but the flashing lights did not allow them to see in its entirety, the transformation of the leader of the horsemen; Xarag.
When he takes out his double-edged sword, he buries it on the earth, which cracks part of the floor, knocking down the majority of the opposing army and melting them into a flame burning with lava and brimstone. they understood that this battle would not be so easy to win and their celebration was still over and they no longer made fun of each other but rather; They trembled with fear.

but their leader shouted, do not fear as we destroy them once, we will achieve it again, do not give up or I will kill you with my own hands, so fight with honor. I play his trumpet again as a symbol of advancing, and fight against them. but many retreated and these were cornered by the four horsemen, with the flames of fire that distilled their steeds. leaving them, pulverized in ashes and pieces of charred bones.

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out of Xarag's eyes, rays came out, penetrating the bodies of soldiers opening them in half mercilessly, satiating their anger, for the massacre they had committed mercilessly against their people, while more stripped of their lives to the opposite battalion, the souls of these soldiers; they were sucked by, Xarag and his four horsemen and each time his power was majestic and great.

battalions continued to gather, to face such a great attack, destructive and voracious. Each defeated soul was sucked, becoming stronger and more invincible, the defeat of the opposing army was imminent, the queen was not mistaken in sending such a precious gift to her faithful servant and warrior because he possessed a soul full of victory and humble in battle without boasting of his previous victories he was a true leader, who deserved to receive his magic potion as a gift from the higher gods.

when the sun was hidden and 90% of the men of the opposite army were destroyed, so they surrendered was inevitable, they were forgiven as they fed their souls and could not afford to have them as prisoners of war, their destruction had to be total .

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Nice ending! You pushed on the accelerator of the spectacular

thanks for the support friend @marcoriccardi

Things went sensational here! Good try @opiman (and you can write @f3nix with the @ attached, no worries) ;-) I agree with @oivas, pay attention when you use copyrighted pics.. I add something more: don't use them or use one.. it's not important. What's important is to try to create something original and support each other. Keep it up!

friend, @ f3nix, thank you for your words and support, every day you learn and grow to be forging things much better, with people like you and contests like the one you do give me a reason to go ahead and put more interest, to do the corresponding corrections.

You're welcome! We all keep learning here ✌️

Greetings, brave storyteller!
Finish the Story Contest - Weeek #21 is out, crispy and warm, for the first time on the Bananafish blog!

thank you, friend congratulations and you have to start working, to project writing and literature to another level. I'm glad for you.

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