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RE: Finish the Fiction Story Contest - WEEK #8

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We must disconnect it, Dr. Maleire asked mEverything was dark and quiet all over the Area-OOX. For a month, they had been waiting for the final order. They had to admit that the studies had failed. It was very cold, but some were still in their laboratories. Dr. Arioch was one of them. On the screen, I watched closely the erratic behavior of XOO-711.
Dr. Maleire approached him from behind in a concerned tone:
What would be the fault?" he asked mentally through simultaneous translation headphones.
I don't know, I really don't know. XOO-711 must have been perfect - he answered with the same mechanism.
He looked again at the brown bear that was unable to perform a minimal operation with certainty. entally. It's a lot of spending for the state. What we can do is keep the artificial A.I. embryos. A while longer in a state of probation," he said, as if to make the moment lighter. Let's go out for a while and clear our minds. Let's break the news to our superior.
Dr. Arioch took his eyes off the screen and, in an effort, rose from his seat with his shoulders down; fate was already cast: his greatest invention had failed.
The two doctors left the room, that's why nobody saw the bright and malicious look on XOO-711's face, nobody when a giggle of rancor was written on his face, nobody saw that he turned around and looked at the screen that was watching him, that among the scraps of a children's game, he took out an object that he had been building in the last few days: a facial exchange bot. No one saw when he approached the embryo cube and chose a mini brown teddy bear and put the lens on his face. No one saw....

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Awsome Nancy! I loved the final, with the repetition and the suspension..te estás volviendo cada vez mejor, mi amiga :-)

Thank you for your comment, good friend.

Good job! Good cliffhanger at the end. Malicious A.I. with an innocent toy look, I like it!

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