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RE: Fractal Writing Contest #3 - winners get to keep their souls! (and a few SBDs); Results of Contest #2
Twist
After several years of searching
The desire only became burning
With the twist and turns flirting
They didn't know she was hurting
It felt like she was chased by some gods
Knowing not the odds
She shows approval with a nod
Not knowing it was a fraud
At the end of the day
When everyone had gone their way
She stood by the bay
Not knowing she would be slayed....
Wow, great poem, dark and depressing -- I think it fits the image perfectly.
Wow, thanks much....
I'm glad it does
You are the 2nd winner of this contest! Check out the new one here
Oh wow!
Thanks, I'm glad I won