Tunis By Night - Flash Writing Contest - Die Hard Steem in co-operation with Isle of Write
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Tunis by night is a symphony ,but all I hear is noise when you're gone. Tunis by night is a light drawing but the tiniest light hurts my eyes in your absence. Tunis by night puts on it's best perfume but without you I only smell cars' exhaust fumes. Tunis by night is a dancing play but I'm the clumsy actor who forgot the steps when you're away. It is so full of life but to me it's overcrowded. Now I find it freaky what once was magic and I find it scary what once was exciting. Without your voice all my senses are now disturbed. Come back to me before they're lost forever. Everyday away from your eyes all my life keeps getting blurring. We used to love it and admire it together, we used to adore every detail in it, or was I just in love with you ?
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تحيا تونس العزيزة ويحيا الشعب التونسي
You're so nice for commenting on this post. For that, I gave you a vote!
شكرا شقيقي الكريم امثالك من من يجعل حساباتنا تتنفس الهواء النقي. ربي يحفظكم ياهل تونس انتم عسل و سكر موووووووواه احبكم في الله
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Thank you
Where are you from ?
from Morocco.
This is a same pictures of my village:
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beautiful I want to go there
is it close to the famous summit of the atlas mountain ?
you are welcomed at any time.
Yes, the Great Atlas is far from the famous summit of mount Toubkal by 180 km
altitude de +4367 meters
for mor informations:
https://steemit.com/travel/@mustaphaaoufi/the-first-time-i-get-to-the-highest-peak-mount-toubkal-in-north-africa-up-to-4367-meters-above-sea-level
Beautiful words... Made me wanna pack up and go there. I've always been dreaming about travelling to Tunisia, but i think I should actually do it. Thanks for sharing your passion towards such a lovely country.
You're so nice for commenting on this post. For that, I gave you a vote!
Thank you @nuridin
Make shure you contact me if you come. I might have a special program for you 😉
Beautifull words, nice post
thank you @rabihfarhat
@hazem91 This is lovely! Now I have travel plans. ;)
Welcome :)
Try not to come alone lol
Wow! This is so good. You are one good writer! claps
😊 Thanks @Nays
you are a very good writer too
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@arabsteem curation trail !
و تم اختيار مقالتك ضمن مقالات يومية مختارة للنشر اليوم في مقالنا! :)
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Love the opening line -
Tunis by night is a symphony ,but all I hear is noise when you're gone
and the echo of Tunis by night, building up to the plea - come back before the sensory magic is lost forever. And then - the twist. The what if.
I love the "voice" here - and I hope you'll try the workshop next time, to clean up a few typos. A little polish, and your 150 words will shine even more. Well done!
Now I regret not trying the workshop before posting. In my defence, I would say I didn't know how to. So I'll try to figure it out today.
https://discord.gg/KgVeGe
It's easy - at the moment, though, steemit seems to be acting glitchy. Hope to see you soon!
The picture looks like a city of many coloured stars. The words describe the agony of love lost. Keep looking for beauty, I see in your words that you know it is there. :)
thanks katrina 😊