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RE: Tunis By Night - Flash Writing Contest - Die Hard Steem in co-operation with Isle of Write
Love the opening line -
Tunis by night is a symphony ,but all I hear is noise when you're gone
and the echo of Tunis by night, building up to the plea - come back before the sensory magic is lost forever. And then - the twist. The what if.
I love the "voice" here - and I hope you'll try the workshop next time, to clean up a few typos. A little polish, and your 150 words will shine even more. Well done!
Now I regret not trying the workshop before posting. In my defence, I would say I didn't know how to. So I'll try to figure it out today.
https://discord.gg/KgVeGe
It's easy - at the moment, though, steemit seems to be acting glitchy. Hope to see you soon!