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RE: Week 38- Win a Membership in Steem Basic Income - Tell us About a Favorite Freewrite

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@marvyinnovation (39) · yesterday - placed under last weeks....
"Magic of the season" freewrite by wems is the one i liked very much.

This emotional tale starts with an excellent opening, continues in a very wary way, getting us caught in a gripping manner....

"She closed her eyes and prayed dearly for it to be a stone. She opened them to see the tall man trying to get up."

In the para above these lines, the writer clearly describes the aftermath of this incident, if the accident that occurred would have left the victim dead. The writer also clearly tells us the AND ALSO THE ILL EFFECTS OF DRINKING TOO MUCH LIQUOR.

It is here the writer rises the tempo and gave this tale a happy ending!

As per the title suggests, this is really a Magic done by The God to save her from getting into deep problems . Yes this is a Magic of the Season.

https://steemit.com/freewrites/@wems/magic-of-the-season-freewrites

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