RE: We-ALL-Write ~ New Contest (test)
The Story - Part 20. The End for @snook
Joyce realized she must have been drugged and started drinking water but the spirit squirrel would not go away, screaming “snap out of it … you do not have much time!” She had to go to the bathroom again, but was hesitant just in case the squirrel was right. She asked the squirrel, “What do you want me to do?”
The squirrel told her to go to the bathroom and quickly. Since she had to go anyway, she followed as the squirrel jumped on top of seats and heads to race her there. As she reached the bathroom the squirrel told her, “Evan is waiting for you.”
She stopped in her tracks and asked, “how do you know about Evan?” The squirrel said I have known you most of your life, I am your guide and teacher. Choose, which life you want to live. Do you want to stay on this plane and die or find happiness with Evan?
Seconds felt like minutes, and time seemed to stop. Everything was in slow motion, and the squirrel told her the teleporter would be closing so she had to choose quickly.
Chills ran up and down her spine as she opened the bathroom door and walked inside. She was immediately teleported to the underwater sea world from her dreams. Evan was waiting for her and kissed her hand, she looked down and saw the lovely diamond on her hand.
One thing was certain, she felt more happiness with this being called Evan than either the co-pilot or the married Italian man. All her insecurities and fears were completely gone. She belonged to Evan.
She looked into Evan's eyes once again and could not keep her eyes off of him, he took her in his arms and their first kiss was one of eternity. She could barely think anymore in the hands of this amazing creature.
Besides, Queen Joyce of the underwater world had a nice ring to it, Joyce thought as Evan picked her up to carry her to the bedchamber.
Respectfully submitted, @eaglespirit.
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Stunning and Beautiful ending to the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WoooooooooooooooooooooT!!!
and THANK YOU @eaglespirit for everything you went out of your way to help with!!!! many hugs
Yay, I am so happy you liked it! I was kind of nervous with all this good writing and participation. Thank you all for making this a fun time for me Our creative minds really came together. I tend to prefer cliff hanger middle parts, so the ending came as a good challenge. Thank you @snook!! xx Eagle
Great ending! I attended the memorial service for the passengers on that ill-fated flight and I saw Joyce's name on the plaque, but since they were not able to recover the bodies they had no way of knowing that she had teleported off before it crashed. Or did she? Perhaps that is just her version of a watery grave since the plane went down in the middle of the ocean. 🤔
Just saying 😏
Wow. A new character in the story....@deaconlee ...... I was also in the memorial service. I told her family condolence.
Hey, I got to do the Ending ... my story! Buahahaah
What does that mean, that means that my story is it ... The End. Peace.
Eagle.
Sure sure, I know, the ends the end an all. But you were not at the memorial service so I thought that you might want to hear about it. 😇
I was there actually, even though the transporter closed in the plane, another one opened up and sucked all of the attendees into the under Sea World @snook, @deaconlee, @abrahamcera!
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
LOVE IT!!!!! <3
Hahahahhahah 🤣🤣🤣
Wow. This came to an end in a beautiful way. @snook we should do some more. This was fun
Yay! glad you liked the ending! Woop Woop. xx Eagle
Wooooooow. I cant believe this. I cant deny that this short story is good. Goodmjob guys. And the ending, really is the ending. Followed you. Because I know youll post more quality posts
Awww thank you so much guys!! I'm so glad you liked it .. we all came together pretty good I think! i got a little lost after two separate Part 7's but I tried to grasp it all and include it. Yay!! xx Eagle
Where are you from? You know, eagle is the Philippine's national bird. It signifies (or reminds us) strength.
It’s the USAs National Bird too, I am Native American from the USA. I just write. Apiece on my name and where I come from.
I love the thinking bonhomme icon ;) She's cute.
thank you! i deleted it, since i just submitted the ending ... :)
I love it ;) I love how we all added important aspects to the story, the being I introduced one of them. I love how the squirrel guided her. This was so much fun to read and write.
Thank you so much! I found your part very intriguing and hey why not, that's what stories are for, right? A great collaboration and thank you for your appreciation! :)
Now i can't wait for @snook to read it out ;)
Oh right! I forgot about that part, thank you so much for reminding me, this should be good. i hope she does voice tone changes .. buahahaaha
i wonder what the squirrel will sound like? heeeheeee
Yeah ;) voices would be fun.
heck yeah!! i love doing that type of reading, just not videos LOL