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RE: I Would Stay.
But the ending is uplifting! It's good! Right?
Did I read this wrong?
He breaks through, in the end.
Never mind what all precedes this
Great story!
Just one editorial suggestion: if it's not a free write, I'd pare down the wording just a wee bit.
Love it - powerful stuff!
Thanks, I think it definitely ended with hope... and possibilities.
Although it technically isn't a 'freewrite' as part of a freewrite challenge, I still treated it as a freewrite. By the time it was done, I was feeling a little too raw to go back and even reread it, much less edit. I am keeping a folder of these freewrites/short stories, though, in case I want to go back and rewrite/edit them for a more solid... piece. If that makes any sense!