It was pretty raw to write. Sometimes I don't really know what's going to come out when I write, but I have been feeling very emotional and raw lately, so I suppose that was bound to come out in my writing.
Thank you for reading and for taking the time to comment. I truly appreciate it!
But the ending is uplifting! It's good! Right?
Did I read this wrong?
He breaks through, in the end. Never mind what all precedes this
Great story!
Just one editorial suggestion: if it's not a free write, I'd pare down the wording just a wee bit.
Love it - powerful stuff!
Although it technically isn't a 'freewrite' as part of a freewrite challenge, I still treated it as a freewrite. By the time it was done, I was feeling a little too raw to go back and even reread it, much less edit. I am keeping a folder of these freewrites/short stories, though, in case I want to go back and rewrite/edit them for a more solid... piece. If that makes any sense!
It was pretty raw to write. Sometimes I don't really know what's going to come out when I write, but I have been feeling very emotional and raw lately, so I suppose that was bound to come out in my writing.
Thank you for reading and for taking the time to comment. I truly appreciate it!
Emotionally raw, lately:
I'm in the same place. Maybe that's why the ending leaves me thinking this is a bright story.
But the ending is uplifting! It's good! Right?
Did I read this wrong?
He breaks through, in the end.
Never mind what all precedes this
Great story!
Just one editorial suggestion: if it's not a free write, I'd pare down the wording just a wee bit.
Love it - powerful stuff!
Thanks, I think it definitely ended with hope... and possibilities.
Although it technically isn't a 'freewrite' as part of a freewrite challenge, I still treated it as a freewrite. By the time it was done, I was feeling a little too raw to go back and even reread it, much less edit. I am keeping a folder of these freewrites/short stories, though, in case I want to go back and rewrite/edit them for a more solid... piece. If that makes any sense!