Thankyou so much @mistermercury, I'm grateful for your help and your feedback. It's really nice to come on to Steemit as a beginner not knowing what might happen, and then to have people seemingly 'get where you're coming from', and then help find the right direction.

I have had a vague awareness that what I am writing might not be digestible for some, so as much as I can I would like to train a more conversational and simplified style. But yeah, it's an energy thing that's compelling me to write, so I more or less go with that and see how it pans out.