Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #17

in #competition6 years ago

this is my entry in the contest I hope you like it

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    At that moment flashes of bright lights were accentuated; They began to look at each other's faces and murmured what kind of God it was that came down from heaven in that splendid carriage.

thinking the giant Ulfric Red Beard who was seven feet tall if he was the God of the heavens with the English to fight against the Vikings or was on his side smartly I hope to descend but also in positions of attack and alert for any battle prominent.

When suddenly open the gate of the spacecraft and a battalion of ancestral aliens of 8 million light years coming from the advanced plutonic neutral galaxy in galactic civilizations, the trumpets rumble and their leader announces that they will be destroyed from the fas of the earth if they do not collaborate with them in obtaining minerals and fuel for them, such as gold, silver, bauxite, coal, platinum, diamonds, emeralds, among others.

Ulfric Red Beard said I will never be a slave to anyone and if I collaborate with you they will have to help me also to conquer other lands and kill the English and the leader of the alien colony I advise and said if I finish or defeat is everything and I want all Vikings and English work together and collect what we need if they will not be exterminated all regardless of the condition, color or nation, and that they were not by chance but that they had to fulfill a mission at that time and justify their purpose in That place at that time and that this was a land full of riches which could serve to help them to go and continue traveling so that they learned a very important life choice to make a decision at the time to continue living as a united people or they would all be eliminated and they did not deserve to be alive, which was very valuable to lose because of an absurd war they have a small lapse of time to decide.

Ulfric Red Beard and Durham met to make a decision and sooner than ever they decided to collaborate and the two battalions began with the mission of collecting and complying with the orders of the ancestral aliens; when the two peoples began to live noticed that their dispute was something silly and absurd that power is not only trump card to have powerful warriors to exterminate each other if not that together they could get more and could be mixed races and get a diversity in its religious customs and how to do things to happen within 5 days had collected a lot of minerals and captain of the alien troops decided that was enough but their purpose was not that, it was just a lesson to think again and they will behave as a single people and nation that women and men regardless of their race can live together that their kings can make lasos to unite nations and that the wars between them do not lead to anything positive.

then I can not stand the pressure of being directed and vigor and evil consumed him unsheathing his sword and warrior soul and at that time was split by a super powerful weapon of ancient aliens leaving only dust and his sword on the floor at that moment the term people understand that and get a chance to do good and positive things there is always someone who disagrees and has to pay the price and other vikingas troops were disappointed stop a selfish and evil leader and allowed peace will reign between them and as much as the Vikings and the English coexisted in a peaceful and honest way and gave thanks to the gods who came down from heaven with such a good attitude and be able to unite people with an understanding beyond what we We could understand and understand at that moment and put aside the principles of war and death and bring peace and life to us.
being incognita a thought among them if they would be visited again by these aliens?

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Good @opiman! A message of peace and collaboration between two different cultures, this is a different and original message between the many contributions I read.

thanks @f3nix inspired me with this contest I loved it and I was motivated to convey a positive message to readers

Smart ending, I would like to get a hold of some of that gold and silver. Glad you made the deadline.

excellent choice @wonderwop; I wish we could share the gold and silver among all my friend, waiting for another contest to be part of it and participate to convey a positive message

Nice message! We would need another visit of those aliens, because we haven't learned yet to put aside our differences and our disputes, to collaborate together for progress and quality of life.

Maybe, next time, you could use a little more punctuation... I had some difficulty in reading your story, but it's nice anyway! ;)

Thank you for taking the time to read the story, and your constructive criticism will take you to grow in this community that I like so much

Week #18 slowly stepped out from the shadows.. Godspeed, brave storyteller!

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