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RE: Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #17

in #competition6 years ago

Nice message! We would need another visit of those aliens, because we haven't learned yet to put aside our differences and our disputes, to collaborate together for progress and quality of life.

Maybe, next time, you could use a little more punctuation... I had some difficulty in reading your story, but it's nice anyway! ;)

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Thank you for taking the time to read the story, and your constructive criticism will take you to grow in this community that I like so much

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