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in #artchallenge7 years ago (edited)

I made a basic rhyme/poem to put my sad feelings somewhere.

https://steemit.com/artchallenge/@wordsword/artchallenge-askinya-surreal-photo-by-igor-morski-poem-wordsword

Relationship

Relationship without a captain, rowing but they go nowhere.
She sits there without mirror image, holds on to her teddy bear.

Mommy always busy stirring, has no attention, no love to give.
Daddy is a vague reflection, that can't show her how to live.

She sits there without a peddle, without a compass, without a clue.
In a boat that's going nowhere, without a captain, without crew.

And on the ship with no affection, no destination, no hands on deck.
She is lost, without reflection, no eyes like mirrors that look back.

How will she ever reach the shoreline, when there is no one that can row.
Or teach the lessons of adulthood, on how to learn and love and grow

Edit; The last sentence was (Or teach the lessons of adulthood, maybe it's all just one big show.)

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