ARTCHALLENGE @askinya - Surreal photo by Igor Morski - poem wordsword

in #artchallenge7 years ago (edited)

This made me kind of sad. I put my thoughts and feelings in basic rhyme.

Relationship

Relationship without a captain, rowing but they go nowhere.
She sits there without mirror image, holds on to her teddy bear.

Mommy always busy stirring, has no attention, no love to give.
Daddy is a vague reflection, that can't show her how to live.

She sits there without a peddle, without a compass, without a clue.
In a boat that's going nowhere, without a captain, without crew.

And on the ship with no affection, no destination, no hands on deck.
She is lost, without reflection, no eyes like mirrors that look back.

How will she ever reach the shoreline, when there is no one that can row.
Or teach the lessons of adulthood, on how to learn and love and grow

Edit; The last sentence was (Or teach the lessons of adulthood, maybe it's all just one big show.)

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Really great!!!!!!!!!!!! Resteemed!

Thank you for resteeming I forgot to resteem the new challenge I will do it right away :)
I changed the last sentence I think it fits better this way. More in the style of the rest .
I didn't want to make a whole new post for a few words. Hope you understand

Thank you very much!!!!!!!!1 Of course,I understand! Don't worry!

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