The image is made of own imagination and thoughts

davidad (75) 5 years ago

There are time in the life of human beings when situation might call it raw with anyone! Thanks for your digital art design.

There was three brilliant children who always comes together when they are on free period while in the school! When they gathering together they do ask themselves; what do you want to be in life? The First boy - A said he wants to be a risk taker, Boy 2 - B say's he wants to do business of buy and selling and the third boy- C says I don't want to be a risk taker neither business man but he want to engineer to construct bridges and build a modern house for people.

Few years later, they already done with the secondary education, this Boy -A risk taker always enjoying spending his money on gambling and pools not long be won big money from gambling , the rest of the friends B and C were thinking otherwise they should had chosen the same career. Before year run out this boy A got a serious problem between this boy B advice him to go with him to other city and investment his money on bussinss, but he wouldn't change his mind, he continues with his gambling he later lose hugely and back to √0, others two friends pity him but their pity couldn't bring back the money that was been waited on gambling.

Boy-B continue working hard towards his career in life, the little capital he started with continue to grow bigger and higher, market survey and properly plan make more success rate than before! Boy--C become a professional engineer working for a popular construction company witha very nice remuneration, he survives many works successfully and he became a very popular man!

During a festival season! The three boys (A,B & C ) of yesterday become a man now, they locate each other as they usually does in the past! When they are telling each other's about their success, only Gambler boy couldn't recorded new success, they were on their discuss a old man came around; they honor and welcome him to their gathering as well, this old man asked them if anyone of them heard, or read a story about about "A mountain top" none of them has never read or heard about this story; he told them the story is simple and straight but difficult to obey! They asked old man why? He told them in life when you clamps a mountain always remember there are more mountain still needed to be clamp, meaning that, the one who among you with no success will overcome his trial time, he just clamping his own mountain, every of you will clamp it as well, it is better you join hands together to clamp it, so when it's someone else time too to clamp the mountains of life they could together and their journey will be more real, energetic and successful; they appreciate his advices!

Few days later, they gather again and started meditate on old man story " Boy B and Boy C helps Boy -A back on track; that is how Boy -A picking new life back, he combined business with his ideal of gambling; follow Year Boy-A the gambler become rich and famous...

The next festival season gathering; they started as usual Boy -A records success second to Boy-C things were not moving well or Boy-C it was gambler boy (Boy-A ) that gave him some clues and ideal!

Unfortunately, year fellow, during the festival season B-C lost his job! It was Gambler (boy a and boy B) welcome him warming, strengthen him and introduce him to business class; following year things were not that much okay for Boy C but second year everything changes to better, he begin to travel abroad for bussinss; Boy C later became the richest among them. In life challenges of life is evitable, everyone should prepare by helping others too, Cox no one knows what tomorrow will bring. I will take this time to thank you Snr. @xpilar for your support for many here on Steemit, God will continue to watch over you and continue to bless you. Thanks for share your great work.

Regards
@davidad

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xpilar (82) 5 years ago

Hi @davidad

Thank you for your thoughts and there is a good deep sense in your

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davidad (75) 5 years ago

You are welcome Snr. @xpilar... Glad you enjoyed the story!!!.

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frankhood (48) 5 years ago

Great job of imagination

The scenario should be thought before you begin to compose the story, so that it is written in only one or two sentences, along with being full of motion and interesting. For example, the initial scenario in Gabrielle Garcia Marquez's The Handsomest Drowned Man in the World : The lifestyle of an entire village changes with the discovery of a mysterious, handsome man drowning on the beach, and from here the writer can draw the reader to read his story with interest. [1] Find the scenario for your story

Select the hero of the story

After writing the script should ignore the feelings of the writer whether good calling him pride or not good, because it has nothing to do with the quality of the story or its failure, and in the next step should the writer read the full story to find the protagonist, although the hero has Is known first to the writer but after reading the story may change the idea and change the hero, the hero is not necessarily the narrator of the story, or the good man who helps others, but is the person who makes the decisions that will push the story forward. ]

Follow the traditional story structure

The story structure, the conflict, the escalating events, the climax of the story, and the conclusion must be followed. It is also necessary to look at the beginning and the end as this is the most necessary and important part, and to ensure that the first and last lines of the article are The strongest in the story. [3]

Make sure the end is convincing

The end of the story must be persuasive, non-contrived, smooth. The reader does not feel the end of the story is real, carries meaning and meaning to life. Endings do not need to be limited to tears, hugging and other influences such as lights

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xpilar (82) 5 years ago

Hi @frankhood

Thank you for your thoughts on how to build a story

simonblake (48) 5 years ago

beautifull art @xpilar

Every day ... sit in the same place, that shabby sofa, prepare the seconds that emanate from the wall clock that beats my head like the alarm, and as the seconds increase, the remaining seconds of life will be reduced with me, and any life is not at the age of eighty. ! Look around me to bring back the deadly daily routine to find that cat with fewer teeth than the rest of my teeth to realize that it needs more death than I need, those curtains, oh those curtains, if I could tear up the rest of its worn threads to see that outside world through that window Shattered, but who argue?! How can I see the sunlight from those huge factories that filled the area, and how can I breathe after it has become the filtered lungs of those black fumes that I no longer know are fumes? Or pull thunder. I never looked like I was looking out of the window to see all those vast orchards and play from morning to evening without fatigue. One day, time will take from me all my childhood happiness and turn it into stones and iron piles producing all these toxins, They say it's factories! The plants that make only the smoke and the waste that I think one day it will become a beast eating the old ones who have no life in them any human being speaks to them ... Yes, without shame, I mean myself! And how the youth to pass and the ages are as old as I have been and washed away with my husband, whom I did not know before the meaning of being the most beautiful woman in the world, because there was no women in his world other than me, ah if time or come forward to go to another life in which he gave even one moment I remember all The days of that year that we lived together before he died in front of that damned truck, yes I still remember it ... A rusty blue driven by a drunken young man running away from a man who almost killed him with a rifle for stealing his rusty truck. Make my seventy-six days beyond hell unbearable. What's that sound ?! Do you know? I forgot that voice as if it were a scan of my imagination, a moment please, visitor, I told him to arrange the place that had passed seven decades and I did not open the door to a visitor, except the boy who has the bike now and I see the qualities of his grandson in it. Life is hungry. I said with great enthusiasm: "You prefer, my son." He opened the door with his loud, dusty entrance, and I did not know that that moment would be the last moment of my life.

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xpilar (82) 5 years ago

Hi @simonblake

Thanks for your sensitive story

robertokossy (47) 5 years ago

nice artwork @xpilar
he entered my life by accident I entered a summit of despair I was then plunged in a sea of sorrows, I thought that the Savior convinced myself that God has given me compensation for what I have to this world to transform my life from black to rainbow colorsTried once and found the rejection and tried again and again until he came to accept me note that from the outset I explained to him the details of my life accurately and I passed him and found him acceptance of what I am and he does not care about the outlook of society.

I began waiting for him to feel my feelings again. I waited for him every day to send me "Good Morning." If my heartbeat accelerated, things developed and the relationship grew stronger, so I could no longer tolerate his separation and I was not satisfied with the few hours I spent with him. And to see its features and food by asking for a telephone number without hesitation provided him with the number. What was beautiful of those moments when I heard his voice did not seek the world of joy and continued the relationship until it is time to fulfill the promises made, but he told me that his family refused my presence among them did not save me and did not affect me to my great confidence in him and he is able to overcome this and I am with him.

Then I told him that I was ready to continue without any hope of marriage because I love him and I just want to be next to him and then asked to see him like any two people who meet but he refused and hard, his reasons were meaningless in front of Shawki to see him so I wrote and prepared the request many times and every time he refused for some reason and evaded I did not care about the subject, I was not eager to see him or anything with him, but I still want his presence in my life. His way of love changed. His mood, his strange requests, and his deadly desires grew. I asked for his phone number The other refused, asked for other pictures refused, asked to see him refused, took him the number of the company in which he works and contacted them and asked them answered me that there is no employee by this name told him this talk denied and justified, his honesty and silence but the suspicion is increasingly decided to end the question by the intelligence and if this person It does not exist permanently.

Then I was shocked why? Why am I? Why wrote about suffering and misery? I did not care, but he did not care. He answered plainly. Yes, I told you about him, not me, and I do not want to marry. I answered him simply. I will not forgive you. Fantasy and extinction

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xpilar (82) 5 years ago

Hi @robertokossy

Thanks for your thoughts and a sad story but good

juliaz (47) 5 years ago

I like this story and want share it with u
story Fish tells that a big fish and her daughter , They were playing in a quiet blue sea. They saw three ships sailing in the distance. The big fish said: They are the sons of humans The little fish shouted with emotion: I wish I knew where they were going on a dangerous trip to explore how I wish to make such a trip !. I want to get to know other bays and seas, maybe someday, not now, my dear. I'm still small on the risk of exploration, I'm not as small as you think, Mom. I mean, when you grow up more, my daughter, the whole world will be at your disposal when you discover what you want. She said muttering: How is this, and I have not yet found anyone help me at least to get my chance of playing and hearing the cancer snatched from the talk of the small fish asked her: What is the thing that I hear you grumbling about because you do not take enough fun? In your opinion, a mistake of this I do not know. I want to make an exploratory trip, and my mother says that I am still young and I have to wait until the largest seagull is involved in the conversation, and he said: Your mother is right to see you also stand in front of my desire, and do not help me for fear of you, you may trample your way and waste, and we do not want you The small fish replied, "I will not lose my way, and I will not waste. Why can not you see that I am big enough to take the adventure that I want and not feel?" I slipped out of the bay toward the unknown. I glimpsed one of those cruising ships, By swam as fast as you could to reach them, but their ability to do so was much less What do you think wait for me ship! I screamed with all her might. No one heard the call from the sailors. At moments when the ship was missing, the small fish felt tired and disappointed, so she decided to return to her home, but she was lost and did not know how to reach the Gulf that embraced her family and friends. While she was swimming in a confused panic, I came across something wrong. I asked him: Do you know where the road to my house shook the octopus's body, spread its legs in all directions, and ignored the question and rushed to some sleeping oysters? I asked them: "I lost my way to my house. I received an answer, and I went to a sea lamp, so that you could show me to me Coordination brings me to my house and also the small fish have not received an answer, and did not find help her to reach her home, everyone of them is easier, indifferent Bmahntha What do I do now, and what is my destiny? My mother and friends were right when they said I was small to do a solo adventure and suddenly, I noticed that the fish around her were swimming very fast and before you asked what was happening here, a great shadow fell on it. I felt the silence of the water and coolness and knew that the next is the shark, and that the fish fled for fear of him tried to shark, catch the small fish, swallowing it but was able to cram itself between the rocks accurate difficult for the large size to enter and when she felt the disappearance of danger emerged from the reservoir , She did not know how she got there, but she knew she would not go back to adventure again. At this young age she said to her mother and to her friends, who welcomed her and rejoiced greatly in her return. Safe into the safety of the Gulf.
I hope my story like you all my friends thank you for @xpilar

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xpilar (82) 5 years ago

Hi @juliaz

Thanks for your thoughts and a nice story

gank (62) 5 years ago

Great job!!

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xpilar (82) 5 years ago

thank you

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stef1 (80) 5 years ago

Hi @xpilar, I hope you have had a nice Saturday and enjoyed nice winter day. Seeing your digital Art it looks like nice sunny day, but also those beautiful olive and green colors remind me spring and that makes our cold days in Scotland a little bit warmer, although we can't complain this winter was relatively warm. That beautiful landscape that you created could be also here in Highlands, with our mountains and such little vegetation due to rough weather. Gorgeous sky and it feels like the planes just passed flying by. As to my Saturday, in Art community there is a lot of dispute happening if you are curious about I have resteemed the post from one of the famous Austrian Artist @thermoplastic. I wish you a nice Sunday and as always was really glad to see your digital painting, Cheers @Stef1

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