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RE: Crack the paint

in #art6 years ago (edited)

Wow, @purplevision/darkvision, amazing poem... and the drawing is mind blowing! :D It reminds me very much of one song that I make before 2 or 3 years ago, if it was image it will be like your drawing ...in a wonderful way you recreate the hopeless emptiness. :D Here is the lyrics in English it is not so good in translation, but however...: :D

Shelter

I saw my dream through the gap
the stars quietly fell
like cut heads
which in the lunar womb
found theirs shelter

In an cold embrace
secretly they search
theirs own way up
the sky was black
the living memory- long ago was mute

Hidden in my sleep
they are doomed
to rot in infertile lands

And here is the song it is really weird: https://soundcloud.com/pmmulio/podslon :D

PS: And try your luck in some of the poetry contests here, you can win them :)

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hahaha darkvision? Someone please bring out the thick black eyeliner ! 😂
Loveeee the lyrics and the song!! But I must admit that the one I like the most was Hopмaлнocт it reminds me of my black metal days 🤘

It's called "Normality" and it is about hypocrisy and comformity in society.... :D It is really strange that you associate it with your black metal period...... it is not so black and not so metal :D, And I'll share you the whole first album because you heard the song without torture from my side and because you want some personal things :D

PS: I have make the 30 songs challenge... but I delete it somehow and now I'm to lazy to do it again so you will never see it :D

PS2: And if you have more drawing s and poems like this please give it them :D

PS3: Interesting, you share a link about "Lessons from the Screenplay" have you some deep interest in that because I study this kind of things in my period as a student. And now my main goal is to write screenplay for a movie :D I have write some but they are still crap :D

Already subscribed! :) I'll make sure to listen to it ❤
Booooo you should do the 30 songs, some levity would do well on your site, plus I totally want the band recomendations!
Oh really? What did you study? I love all things related to films, my dream is to make and write films for living.

Okey I will try to do it again ;(

I was learning Dramaturgy and then a little Philosophical anthropology as a master's degree :D
Well.... I have the same dream like you :D but it is really hard because there is a serious conflict in this - if you want to make this for living you will have to take into account with the mass taste and you have to make a lot of compromise with what you really want to say :D And this is the reason I still write my weird nonsense without respecting others and because of that the only function of these screenplays is to accumulate dust :D

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