SHE IS ADDICTED (An Original Experimental Poem)
Neurones running trough,
my blood pressure rises
I look
into
her sparkling eyes
they burn me from
inside,
I feel painful love
in her
fingertips
she is trembling
her lips are shaking
her mind wonders
Off,
again
to the tranquil infinity
where she loses count
of her own smiles,
she is addicted to lies
I try to pull her
Out,
but fall
in with her
we are
Complete.
Two lost minds;
she starts to shake
again
reaches for the cigarette
ash falling all over her paleness;
I'm in her head,
I'm starting to lose
track of words,
smoke screen
in between our minds.
I look deep inside and try
to feel her;
she resents
she blocks it out
no point,
no point,
we going nowhere,
nowhere.
I stop.
~Oh god~
she
Is
a siren,
she controls my thoughts;
I'm dying
slowly
inside her
her cold touch
runs
trough my spine
"Sweet dreams my angel"
I'm
climbing
on
the glass walls of her body,
my imagination
bursts out
...
Colorful?
No.
Fell me with your wine,
I'm stripped to my flesh
and I'm spitting out her blood
I'm exploding,
save me
my impulses lose
C
O
N
T
R
O
L
she holds me on her palm and sets me on fire,
What is going on?
I'm
inside her
Again.
And this time
I cannot check
out.
Nice work!
very nice...
Nice! Thank you.
Nice, i always like experimental poems! Could use a bit more nouns though, imo
Thanks for the critic Kev! Will take it on
love your site too, you are funny with the wine! <3
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