My Home, My Heaven

in #poetry7 years ago

Hello dearest Steemians! Let's start our day with a big thanks to God. The one and only, who makes us still alive today.

The topic: "What is the best place in the world?"

80% of people answer like:

  • Best destination (as I know, they are Green Blue Hole, Cappadocia, Zhangye Danxia, Salar de Uyuni, etc. Maybe you think the same.)
  • A perfect sunbath of beach
  • Savana
  • Very comfortable park

Do you think the same as the points above? Yes, they are some of the beautiful places in this world. But they are nothing if compared with this place.

You will see the differences. And I think you will be happy and hella comfort. Everyone dig it, 100%.


My Home, My heaven


The white wall

With brown pointed window of door frame

And the ceramics floor

Not the velvet


The orchids in a row besides the window

Too fragnant

They embarassed when the east greets


Cool at the outside

Warm inside

Love and affection flow

Reluctant to go


Pretty enough to be seen

Too bad to be left


Memories scattered there

Touch the inner person

Fly in the fresh atmosphere

Stab the depth of heart


Upon entering..

Embrace come close to

With perspiration means

Head this hesitate soul


Never cracked by time

Never gone by night

Never give up because precisely noon

Never likely to snap


My home

That's my home

My heaven

Also my fortness


With the blessed people

Blow the cold night

And keep it in warming


My home

My heaven


Still become like that

As the assistance when sadness comes

And as the eyewitness of the happiness


With love,

Your loyal occupant


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May God blesses you, dearest Steemians!


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Thanks for sharing @poetry-vibes! Gave me the feels! Big time homesickness attack. :((

Hope you really enjoy it :)
Omg, I feel you deep :( you can make a call to your famili, don't you?

I do speak to them regularly though it's been 2 years since I last went home... so there are naturally moments like these when homesickness attacks badly. 😯

Oh that sounds not good 😢
Have you been back to home. I think you must take the time to have a quality time with your fam.

Home is where the heart is, and that is place we should cherish the most

Nice words and I agree :) thanks for commenting

I also write poems, take a look.

Hi friend, very good !!!!!
You would help me with a vote in my post., Thanks !!! ;)

Hello @raziell :) thank you so much and I'll take the time to see yours

Gracis me gustan tus escritos tienes mi voto. te comparto mis escritos.
https://steemit.com/poetry/@poetry-vibes/the-day-after-yesterday

Wow thank you for taking me on an emotional journey. Thats what reading this beauty has done for me tonight. I love it I felt transported imagining the smells of home and grasping that sense of security that only home can.
The world is beautifulwhen you visit different places but nothing compares to the familiarity and warmth that home brings to the soul. For me anyway :]

I love the line:

Never cracked by time
Never gone by night

It felt like a continuation of my own poem today where I wrote about the darkness of the night .

Thank you so much, friend!
Home is our heaven, this is the point. Whatever how nice other places, home never can't be defeated :)

Home is like a cosy blanket :]

Thanks for Share! like your post and love it!

You're welcome. Hope you enjoy it and wait for my next post yeah ☺

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