"A SURPRISE ON THE FIELD": #Fiftywords Story.

in #fiftywords7 years ago (edited)

Hello guys, this is my first entry for the #fiftywords challenge and community!, Hope you like it!


-- "You sure about this?,"
-- "don't get cold feet!..."
--"NEVER!."
--"Hide the head, I'll cut the body".
--"Right, let's do this".

They put their bloody bags on the truck, and drove away to Medellín. Unaware that the drunk fool they just killed, was the son of Pablo Escobar.

Luis Altuve



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https://steemit.com/challenge/@jayna/fifty-word-challenge-results-and-a-new-prompt

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Nice work man! Very good story. I liked it a lot because I love blood :p

Thank you bro, I love blood too! :)

Wow,

Good punchline for an ending... What a surprise awaits them!

😄😇😄

@creatr

I'm sure it won't be pleasant! Hahaha

Well, I can't say I love blood like the other commenters... but wow, this is intense! That would be an unlucky day indeed.

VERY unlucky indeed, lol!

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