I love how you plunge us right into the middle of the action - why is Jennifer screaming? That's good writing, right there. This could be a much longer piece, but it's also awesome 'cause it works just as it is too. Reminds me a little of a Black Mirror episode...
I really enjoyed this, @byn! Great job!
I love how you plunge us right into the middle of the action - why is Jennifer screaming? That's good writing, right there. This could be a much longer piece, but it's also awesome 'cause it works just as it is too. Reminds me a little of a Black Mirror episode...
I really enjoyed this, @byn! Great job!
Thank you! I guess I'm glad that I don't watch many shows/movies (and I avoid horror like the plague!) so that I'm not stealing plots out there!
I appreciate the compliment, especially coming from another writer that I particularly admire!
Ok this story is killing me!!! PLEASE HAVE A PART 2 🙏
This is pretty much an excerpt from a full length story I'm working on right now! :) It was a really inspiring freewrite!
Oh my gosh, that’s so creepy. Nice work!
Thank you! I had fun with this one for sure!
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Ouch, if you have to share a body with a second personality you’d at least hope it’d be a sweet one.
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Arghhh - you really know how to scare us!!
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hahaha! oh man, this is a horror story! What a nightmare and it's feels so real the way you describe it. This is great. another wonderful job Byn!