Xpilar Contest : IMAGINATION 2

in #xpilarcontest7 years ago (edited)

I join a very interesting contest from @xpilar, thank you for creating this contest ^_^ if you want to join it too, just open this link below guys:
#xpilarcontest.

Here is my story:

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In a very huge space ship, many people live happily here. They don't do many works. In everywhere they see are only things that are made from metal. They are only permitted to have one child. This is not the way I want to live. This is just a fun prison.

I know, I am awake now. I try to move slowly to the right side of my bed and stand up. After searching a good position of standing, I do a weightlifting about 30times. Something that I love very much to do is to keep my body in a good shape. At least, girls like me because of my good looking and this body shape. Hmm... it has been proven many times.

I hear the door is opening, and...
"Hey chiken! Are you not coming out again to the party today?" Someone comes in and sits on my bed. I know whose voice that is. The one who always disparages me but also loves me so much, Criss.
"It will be bored for me. But anyway, do you think it is daytime, isn't it night time? Aren't we in outer space?" I keep doing my excercise while speaking with that Crizzy man.

I know he feels annoyed now. I am the one who makes him so, and i did it in purpose.
"Well, will it give any different for you?? A blind chiken boy, Arlo!!"

Hahaha. Yeah, that is me. A blind man who never wants to mingle with many people, and my name is Arlo Sparkly. I know, it is a weird name. It is really in contrast to my physic which can't see any light at all. That's why my friends call me chiken, and that is one of reasons I don't like being surrounded by them. I hate them because of 'those' many reasons. Criss?? Well, he is different, he calls me chiken because of another case.

I feel tired and choose to take rest for a while. Staying in outer space means you need to do a lot excercise to maintain your healthy so that you can have a long life and not short, and... again...to look for a girl.
"Tell me one reason why I should go. If you can convince me, I will join you to the party."
"Oh Come on, Arlo! There are many beautiful girls there. I know you keep doing weightlifting everyday to get one of them beside you."
"I don't even know how the appearance of beautiful or ugly girl is. So I don't care about their face." Suddenly Criss keeps silent. Does he feels sorry? It rarely Happen to him because of this kind of conversation. "I only look for a girl who has the same imagination as mine Criss." I continue my explanation.
"What is that?"
"To live in a beautiful place again, just like earth. Just like our ancestors did long time ago."
"You step too far from where you are Arlo. Earth is gone. It has been destroyed. And we can't find another one like it..."
"Yet" I move slowly to reach my bed and sit right beside him.
"You are crazy."
"At least I still have an imagination to reach." I smile, I think I won this time.

I feel the bed is shaking. It seems Criss is moving. Is he standing now? Do I really put him in anger with my opinion? I think there is nothing wrong with having an imagination.

"They keep disparaging you because of that. I can't always stand for you, Arlo! You need to change your thought!"
"Then tell me your imagination?"
"The only one imagination we should aware is we are in a very beautiful and save place now, in a very huge and beautiful ship where many people laugh happily together without being affraid of getting killed by many poisons anymore."

The only one thing I can believe is that this is really a huge ship, so that I can't feel whether it is moving or just floating now. Furthermore, a blind person just like me really don't have any clue of how the ship looks like. I live in imagination life, where everything I can see is only an imagination. Besides that, I can't argue him anymore. He is really in bad mood now.

"I don't wanna continue this kind of vain speech anymore! So, Your decision...??" Criss is waiting for an answer.
"I am in". Suddenly the room sounds so quiet. Sorry Criss. "No special reason. It is because the one who holds the party is Jane."
"So..." I hear some foot steps. Criss is standing so close to me now. "As long as I know her, she has the same imagination as mine." Again, it is really quiet here, now.

"Criss?? Are you there?"
"Just go to hell!!"
"Hahahaha..." I hear the sound of the door, it is opening. It might be Criss, he is leaving. "I love you Criss!" I said it loudly.
"I hate ya...!!"

I know he will keep babbling out there. He is the best friend I have. Bothering him is the best thing this blind man can do. But someday, I will make you witness my imagination comes true Criss.

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Nice to read your story of "Imagination 2" @hime.sama

Thank you @xpilar ^_^ I did some mistakes in writing but now i have checked it.

so good that you did it @hime.sama

Great story, I hope you'd follow me back since I went to the same college as you were. Thank you

No need to explain it @teukudianaulia , i have followed you ^_^

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This is great story, thanks for sharing

Thank you @indraperdanaok. You can join the contest too ^_^

I will, meybe later

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