You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Writing Impact Challenge - Darkness, Passion, and Madness / An Original PoemView the full contextrobyneggs (66)in #writingimpact • 7 years ago Strong ending! I like! A little disjointed, but beautiful.
Glad you liked it! I was caught between using more words and improving the flow, or less words to preserve the fun/challenge part of what I was doing.