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RE: Writing Impact Challenge - Swanlike (Poetry)
'my heart is the fuel
to an everlasting bonfire.' Just this speaks so much louder than everything around. I love this piece of writing! -
'my heart is the fuel
to an everlasting bonfire.' Just this speaks so much louder than everything around. I love this piece of writing! -
Thank you! That's the line I've worked most on. Hours! Glad that it ended well :D
That whole last stanza is exquisite isn't it :)