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RE: Wanted and Waiting: A Writing Impact Poem
Riveting. Reads like wanting someone. The jerking focus mimics the chaos of that feeling.
Riveting. Reads like wanting someone. The jerking focus mimics the chaos of that feeling.
Thank you Ducks! That was quick!!
And that was definitely the goal! I'm glad you enjoyed it and, like, understood it!
We sweet old ladies were young ladies once, my young friend. Nice poem, well done.
Oh, I wasn’t saying I didn’t think “you” would get it specifically, just reading back over it I could see how it could confuse anyone that’s not me. XD