One of the more interesting threads i have read on Steemit till now. Thanks for this.

Editing the original text has changed the face of it. Even though the edited text is longer, it flows so naturally that it feels easier to read and digest.

The breaking down of the text into smaller paragraphs was the most interesting thing i felt. Smaller paragraphs are much easier to read, especially on the screen/ web. Reading lengthy paras is no problem when reading a physical book. Also, the fact that we are constantly bombarded with content on social media which has minimal text and high on imagery has further reduced our capacity to concentrate for any decent length of time. Apparently Trump isn't the only one who likes to have images interspersed in his briefings!