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RE: [Short story] Die an old man, reborn a 10 year old boy.
Nicely done! Sending him back in his own timeline...>XD
This would be a good start, especially if he starts doing things differently this time around. :D
~Thomas Duder, How Far Would He Take It, Really? How Would History Respond?
Not sure I made it obvious enough, but he gets hit by a car at the end and that's the reason his memory flashes before his eyes..
So, now being dead, I don't quite see how he could do things differently :p but yeah, if I didn't kill him, it would be an awesome start to a longer story :p
I actually didn't catch that part, but (then again) I just got back from band practice and I'm still sick. >XD
Plus "Riot" blew me out again, bah.