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RE: Slaughterhouse - Part 9 - Things go South.

in #writing7 years ago (edited)

I can't think of a person who would want to be dead :p But after all, the title of the story is "Slaughterhouse", so I figured it needed some bloodshed again. After all, no crime goes unpunished, right? Whatever the cause may be. Looking at you Clarabelle and Bob

There's plenty of room for what's left to happen here;
How does Clarabelle react to John's death, knowing she caused it? And how does she find out? Does she find out on yet another of her rescue missions? Perhaps on the TV?

What happens to Jim? What happens to John's cows? I have ideas for these two, and will happily write a part on that, but feel free to write about it yourself if you'd like. ^^

If you wish I can also go ahead and write part 10 and leave you with part 11. I promise to stick to our silent deal, in that I won't write about Clarabelle, but only about Jim and (now deceased) John.

So all in all, I believe the story doesn't need to end. Heck, I don't want it to. I'm just introducing some... consequences... to it.

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Oh good, I am glad you want to continue writing! I have some ideas for part 10. I’ll get busy with that. Magic? Telepathy? Space Cows?

Can't wait to see what Clarabelle has in store for us this time ^^

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