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RE: Moving prose writing from a conscious to a subconscious level
I like your post. There are some good points in it.
The bed however in many alternates above would not have squeaked because he was never on it
And I am a 'she' not a 'he' lol
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LOL. You’ve got me there. I am impressed. Not because I have a low opinion about woman’s writing, but because, usually, woman’s writing is (not sure how to put it) not as affirmative and goal oriented.
As for cot … I was unfamiliar with this word (I am not a native speaker) and when I looked it up in a dictionary it was defined as a very narrow bed. From which I came to the conclusion that there were two cots in the room one for her and one for him. LOL
I hope you’ve understood my points, though, bed or no bed.
Btw, in this story, I am talking about a relationship between the government and a person. https://steemit.com/fiction-trail/@mgaft1/a-drone-operator-an-original-short-story
The situation is different, but I think the overall conclusion is very similar to the one you will draw with your story.
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I am glad you don't have a low opinion of women's writing! I find that it depends on the writer. I am a great fan of and was inspired to write by Robin Hobby. A pen name for a woman writer. I don't think you would know upon reading.
I shall have a look :-)
One of my favorites writers is Pearl Buck. So I am off the hook about suspicions in misogyny. LOL I was looking for Robin Hobby online, but couldn't find. Would appreciate the link.
Oh no, silly autocorrect! It's Robin Hobb , my mistake. https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Robin_Hobb
I believe you :-)