Wow. I love this.
At first glance, one might just think it's just a story but the evolving poetry is superb.
The irregular lines makes the reader to be more concentrated, with the unusual shift in style.
Wow. I love this.
At first glance, one might just think it's just a story but the evolving poetry is superb.
The irregular lines makes the reader to be more concentrated, with the unusual shift in style.
Thank you @rexdickson. Most of my poems are stories. I have no set structure but I think about the reader's point of view. I usually don't count syllables or force rhyming patterns but I like the words to flow and come to a point. I'm glad you like this poem. I will look at your poem.