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RE: Twisted words upon the tide. 50 Word Challenge. Prompt - Sea.

in #writing6 years ago

Different tune playing they came
Took dunes with rezone claim,

She's by the shore no more
Buy shells in store

That is awesome, GBM:) I am done the 100 day challenge and hoping to get back into the 50 word. Are poem's okay? @jayna

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I don't think format is a problem.
I must admit poems feel like a bit of a cheat, but I am actually pretty new to the 50, and it is a way of kinda getting used to the limitation.
It is still limiting, I wanted to say so much more about the characters, then I did find the story lost in the over selection of adjectives and had to start over with a more simplified version. Then ID hit 53 and need to decide where to take them from, restructure, come in under, then add back. Repeat.
This simple passage was a 2 am mind bender, that torturous process disclosed qualifies me I think.
I find @jayna very welcoming of any approach to the task, even hitting the 50 exactly is not stipulate only encouraged with positivity.

Yes, yes! Poetry is fine. We have quite a few people who contribute their story in poetry form. This is a challenge with very few rules. The main thing is to create a complete idea in 50 well-crafted words.

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