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RE: Children of Sol - new writing - Prequel
I've read the Harry potter books. The sentence doesn't just make sense to me.
Just re-read this line
Paul looked at Angelica like she had tried to persuade him a certain wizarding school
The wizarding school is Hogwarts.
I didn't mention it by name in the story because it's not mine, it belongs to JK Rowling.