3 Brave souls agree to expose themselves in Monday's writing class on Discord

UPDATE: This critique writing class has been rescheduled to Monday May 7th 8-10 pm Eastern US.

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Earlier this week I posted a request for volunteers willing to have their posts critiqued in my Sunday night writing class. Three brave souls responded:

@tessaragabrielle
@evlachsblog
@dynamicrypto (though he may have been coerced by @dynamicgreentk)

Thank you for putting yourself out there as guinea pigs examples. I think you and anyone else who follows along with my classes can learn from the experience.

And for those still wondering, no. No one will actually be exposing themselves. It's a metaphor for how writers can feel when their work is reviewed, especially when it's done publically. Sorry to disappoint.

Whose post will be critiqued?

After reading all three, I have decided to critique all three during class. They are so different that I think looking at each of them is a great learning opportunity for all of us.

All three volunteers will recieve 2 SBI shares after the class is completed.

Take a look at the posts linked below:

• A Thin Line Between Adventure and Disaster, Or: Help, I Need an Adult by @tessaragabrielle
• The Main Models for Raising Bilingual (or Multilingual) Children and How to Support Them by @evlachsblog
• Steemit Meetup Planning in Philippines & Thailand by @dynamicrypto

If you plan on coming to the class on the Discord, read these ahead of time. I'll share some examples of the text, but I will mostly be focusing on the critique. Keeping the posts open in another tab or window if you can will help you follow along.

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Remember you can post any question at any time. You don't need to wait for a live session.

Note:

• All images are mine or licensed from Adobe except where noted.
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Updated: thanks to @evlachsblog for pointing out my who’s/whose error. That’s what happens when you don’t leave enough time for self-editing or you’re more focused on finding memes than editing like I was!