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RE: Creative Writing Challenge Task #1: "What did we look like?”
Wow, so bleak! The third-to-last stanza really struck me as sad.
But the whole thing really makes you think, "What do I look like?" I think we all could benefit from seeing ourselves with someone else's eyes, and see what needs to be changed.
That's a good point. We all move in our little circles doing our little things for little reasons, but have no perspective on ourselves. Standing back a long ways might be the only way to really see.