Creative Writing Challenge: Task #5: Lost Memories

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Creative Writing Challenge Task #5:

Take a look at the pictures below. You wouldn't believe it, but what you are seeing is something I have spotted on the street next to the rubbish container. Initially I just passed. I was astonished 'how one could throw his memories?' Then I was suddenly stricken by the idea... what if... then just got back, grabbed them and here they are.
Your task is to write a story that connects the two images.


    Darkness.

    Whispers and murmurs.

    Laughter down the hall...a familiar voice, but I can't quite place it.

    The sound of curtains being opened and sudden blinding light invading my slumber.

"Mrs. Humphries? Mrs. Humphries?

    I ignore the voice, it's obviously for someone else.

"Mrs. Humphries...

    I feel someone touch my arm and shoulder, pulling me to sit up

"You have some visitors."

"You must have the wrong person....I'm not Mrs. Humphries!" I exclaim, but as always, my protests go unheeded. I swat at the grasping hands," I can sit up myself!"

I try to glare at the man, but it's mostly a squint due to the sunlight streaming in through the windows. It's always so bright this time of day, that's why I like to keep them shut! But there's nothing for it, so I look to the so-called visitors here to see someone else.

I see a woman; she seems pleasant enough with that smile pasted on her face. And she has a child with her. Well, she is a cute one, isn't she?

"Hi Mom," says the nice looking lady. "We wanted to come and see how you were doing." She walks over to me and gives me a hug. Why are people always touching me without my permission!

"Well," I blurt out, "I'm sorry you've wasted your time. Your mother's not here. Is your mother Myrtle? She's in the bed next to mine." I point to the empty bed as I look over, noticing that strangely there are no sheets on it. "...or was." I'm a bit puzzled, where did Myrtle go? And why doesn't her daughter know?

The woman gives me a smile that doesn't seem happy at all, the kind of smile someone gives when they don't want to cry, trying to keep the corners from turning down. She turns to look at the little girl, who is holding something in her hands, and nods.

The girl approaches me with wide eyes, and holds out the thing in her hands. It's an envelope that's covered in little unicorn stickers and crayons drawings of rainbows and flowers. I slowly extend my hand and take the envelope, looking into her eyes.

She does look familiar, I'm sure I've seen her from when they visited Myrtle before.

I look at the envelope in my hands, and it says in big blue crayon, "GRAMMA."

"This...this is not for me, but I'll pass it along to Myrtle for you," I say gently to the girl. She looks hesitantly to her mother, then back to me.

It's...for you. I found it! I was playing in the attic and found all of these old dresses!" she gasps "They were so pretty! White lace, and there was one with yellow flowers - that was my favorite! And even shoes to match!! And then there was this shiny yellow purse, and I opened it to put in my pretend lipstick - because I was going out on a date with Daddy! He said he'd dance with me..."

Her mother clears her throat, "Addison, dear, tell her what you found," she says patiently, knowing, it seems, that this story is about to take a long tangent if she doesn't interfere now.

"Oh! And IN the purse, were these two pictures!" She points to the envelope in my hands. "But they weren't in the envelope...I made that," she giggles.

I look once more at the envelope. Well, I guess it can't hurt to look, though I don't know why she'd go through the trouble of making me this pretty drawing. I pull back the flap and pull out two photos. They're old, black and white, one with 3 young ladies - wait, isn't that Sadie? and...Patty! Wow, those were the days! We were at Hammonasset beach the summer of our freshman year in college. And that's where I met...

I look at the second picture. It's a class photo. I know this place...And I see him. Sitting down in front in his nice pants suit...it's...it's Alfred! Oh, he was so handsome! When I saw him in Economics 101 I just knew I had to get to know him! And I can't believe I was so brash as to go up to him after class and ask his name! But, I'm glad I did. I remember...

I remember...

I remember...

I look up at the woman, still standing there watching me. But she's blurry. I realize that I'm crying. I remember! This is my daughter, Lisa!

"Oh," my voice breaks, "Oh, Lisa, I remember!"

Lisa sobs and embraces me again, and this time I don't mind. I don't mind at all.

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Well, that was sad and happy at the same time. Well done :)

Thanks, I don't know why I made myself cry writing it.

I cry when I write too. Emotional things are emotional, and it's better than feeling nothing when you write.

True. Maybe that's why I like it so much - emotional release :)

Awww I literally just visited my grandma with Alzheimer's, touching 😔

I'm so sorry, @juliakponsford. It's so devastating. :(

I haven't visited back home in a while so I was somewhat dreading seeing her in the old age home for the first time but it was actually a really positive visit. My family gave me the impression she might not remember me but she looked right into my eyes and smiled and held my face. I said it's me julia, and her eyes got wide and she said looks like her! And started hugging me. I was steeling myself to be very sad but I left feeling good 😊

Aw, that's really sweet. :)

Of course she is going to remember you Julie, I remember you from meeting you once as an avatar

Lol, it didn't surprise me that she connected instantly. In person you must be a force to be reckoned with.

haha, big hugs

I visited my grandmother in a home after many years without seeing her, and she wasn't able to show whether she even recognised me, and my mum.

But she sat there for hours while I drew her portrait.

(this is many many years ago, she long time dead)

I would have that portrait scanned on the hard drive somewhere.

I can look for it if you would like to see it

I would love to see it dm me on discord if you find it!

I haven't gone looking yet, Is in one of the scanned sketchbooks, so many so many

I'll be sure to remember you when I find it

Emotional and raw. Beautiful writing!

I know why you made yourself cry writing this, so that you could make us all cry reading it.

I am sure I have some quote circulating somewhere in my head that I could throw in here.

how about

"Take your broken heart, make it into art"
Carrie Fisher RIP

That's a good quote, @spaingaroo, I hadn't heard it before. Thank you for reading.

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Such a beautiful story and impressive what you are able to create from these photos! Love the end:-)

Thank you for reading it. The ending kind of took me by surprise. I was going to keep going a little bit, and then realized this was a good way to end it. :D

This was interesting to read. The emotions could easily be felt.

Thank you for taking the time to read it :)

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