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RE: The End of Institutions?

in #writing6 years ago

Thank you @yahialabidi. I am beginning to like this poetry contest. Honestly for the first 20 poems I really was pushing myself to write not little by little I find it the best way to express myself. I am beginning to read others like your poems and naquoya and learn reflection.

This poem is the truth and there is no answer. When I look down those halls I can see the history and I'm hazy about the future. The interesting thing is that kids in our school want to go to school. Even my own kids want to go to school.

These lines lingered:

Like a mother's embrace they are comforted within the confines
Of friends of the corridor.

These friends become our family away from family. The halls should not be a dangerous place. Kids feel really safe there like it is their turf.

Thanks for stopping by @yahialabadibi. Your name is one of my favorite to type as long as I'm not sleepy.

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We're learning from each other, in this challenge, and not just poetry (but what matters to them, expanding our sphere of concerns, to other countries, cultures, etc...) and that's a marvelous thing.

Your caring comes through --I can only imagine how heart-making teaching might be & heart-breaking, too.

Thanks, for the kind words, you & the smiles (you must be sleepy, because you mistyped my last name :P

Living example. Thank you very much @yahialababidi.

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