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RE: Teachings of the rain [Day 40]
Wow... Is this construction actually a new form @d-pend?
I like the ABBBAB
as it beats out the last line of each stanza
Then the third stanza ends with 10 syllables instead of five giving me an uplifting feeling at the end of the poem.
Of earth's rain-besotten floors
I flow beyond the edifice of time.
This unfolds the secret of some of your poem endings. I get it.
I really like what you did with this format and will study in more detail and try to follow when I have time this week.