I'll try to use a metaphor I'm sure you'll appreciate GOOOOOAAAAALLLLLL! you nailed it! Like a forward bending it in from the outside corner! Nice. You got the bucket brigade perfectly. Your story is very inspiring. BTW, I've been following the efforts toward a free trade Afrrica, and let me just say, the rest of the world better wake up, because if your people band together, they are so hard working, tough and ingenious, they will be running this big ball of mud in no time!

Now, for the critique. Slow down. You have added so much value here, but where is the beauty of your piece from yesterday? the clean feel and neat formatting? If you want to be an artist, in a content market, take the time to set a standard and let each piece rise to it, but you already know that, don't you. Thanks for this great and inspiring piece. It's my honor to be helping steemers like you!