Journey Into the Unknown - Part 1

in #writing7 years ago (edited)

A brisk wind struck the boy's face as he frantically ran down the path he had once walked down at leisure. Sweat dripping from his brow and a chill running up his spine drove him even faster towards the unknown. His heart raced as if it wanted to get somewhere that only the blood coursing through his veins knew how to get to. This road would be the only road he needed as it's worn down concrete, potholes and cracks held the key to a better life. If he could just run a bit faster, it may be just fast enough to outrun what was chasing him and find a way to get away from the thing that had haunted him most.

How he had gotten into this situation could only be described as bad luck and a few wrong turns in life. The wind was a brisk reminder how far he had strayed from what he had initally set out to do. As the moonlight gave guidance and vision to his frantic escape from the monster that was chasing him he could hardly do anything besides sprint as fast as his legs would take him and slow at brief intervals to pant and gasp for air.

Fear is a terrible thing. Something he had never had to face so directly in his life. The fear of death couldn't compare to the boy's fear of not accomplishing his dream. The dream that had driven him to wake up each day and continue to struggle and overcome life's many obstacles. The dream that blinded him from the present moment and demanded every single ounce of energy in dedication of it's pursuit.

Although still just a boy people had already begun mistaking him for a young man. Even though he was only 14 years old, he was much larger than the other boys in his year group. He was very lean and had even been described as lanky.

All the time spent playing sport was paying off at this very moment as he ran from that which he feared most.

After several hours of running he had become exhausted but he knew he had to keep going. If he stopped now all would be lost. The sounds of the night cried out to him, the deafening orchestra of grasshoppers set against the occasional sound of a twig, leaves or a tree branch cracking under his foot. He had come a long way but his journey into the unknown had just begun. The monster chasing him would continue to chase him without rest completely intent on the absolute and total destruction of this boy.

There was no point in denying it. This situation had become life or death and to the boy, death was not an option.

To be continued....

Please leave comments below with ideas for the next part of this story, I'd like to collaborate with other authors in it's creation. Thanks for your support!

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Thanks man! Any thoughts you had about where to go from here would be greatly appreciated. Take care.

@Idauch 1 Add as much more magic elements to this story 2 Get him in a place unknown by men maybe in a place ruled by creatures 3 Make this boy find love in this journey thru a girl.

Yes! Great ideas... a girl / a mythical world and a clear purpose are needed. Thanks.

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I saw your post in the #postpromotion channel on the WhaleShares discord. Thank you for being with us ldauch! Are you a big fan of fallout? :)

Absolutely! Thanks for dropping by. I hope you enjoyed the story. Look forward to working with you on whaleshares projects. Followed you too!

Hmm sounds a lot as Stephen King .... i just love it :)

That means so much to me! Thanks for your positive words :)

Intriguing story..

Thanks Rahul! Any ideas for Part 2?

Appreciated this story with stakes. Well done.

Great! I'll have another part written soon...

"To be continued..." Why won't I want to read the next? Loved this!

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