Upvoted. Following.
Nice story, but confusing at times. Not the action, but the universe you build behind it. You did need that last paragraph to explain what had just happened. I never would have figured it out on my own.
Having said that, keep writing. I really enjoyed it.
I also have writing on my blog @joe.nobel
Erotica, science fiction, urban fantasy. Read a few of my pieces. No obligation to upvote or follow, although wouldn't turn down either one.