Double life and hidden nights

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Estela, a successful woman who at the age of 30 had achieved all her goals, was a doctor with her own practice in the city centre, lived alone at home and was committed to Andres, a 35-year-old man who was also a lawyer with a successful life, Both of them were very much in love and he couldn't wait to marry the most beautiful woman he ever met in his life, both of them fulfilled their routines and they would see each other until nightfall but she would go home, he insisted that he didn't want them to live together until after the wedding and he accepted it, that made him want his day more earnestly, she was worth it.

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Estela was one of those people who got bored of routine and what no one knew or could imagine was the double life she had, when she left Andres to go home she took two nights to venture out and change her identity, she liked to call herself Debora, she dressed up in different sexy costumes and danced in front of the men who wanted her and couldn't have her, this filled her with adrenaline and after two dances and satisfying the looks and minds of the male audience she went home to sleep and sunrise like new to fulfill her routine, she did not feel that she was doing anything wrong since she had never allowed herself to be touched or had cheated on Andres, she only offered her shows at the club as a star, she smiled at the thought of her life and the last dance before her wedding, and the next one she would give exclusively to her future husband.


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The week had passed very slowly for Andres and it was only two days before the wedding, he and his friends had planned a bachelor party in a bar, something quiet just drinking a little but his friends did not accept so much boredom and dragged him to a club that had become the sensation for Debora a dancer that in every show dazzled, "Friends are crazy, there is no woman in this world who improves the beauty of my Estela but it's okay I'll go just out of curiosity", said Andres funny to his friends who entered a VIP area where they saw everything perfectly and without people around, they took until they finished two bottles between jokes and each one with a particular dancer except him who had refused to let his friends decide, the night was luxurious until they announced the presentation of Debora, the men shouted in desperation and among the shadows sitting with their backs to the public with their legs on either side of a chair was the famous Debora with a nurse's costume that made him smile and think of the doctor he had and that only one day would be his wife, his friends joked with him without taking his eyes off the presiocity of his show on stage, the light gently illuminated it while he delighted everyone with his curves and swaying his hips to the sound of the music still unturned, he put his little hat on his side and flirted with the audience and continued to sway and enjoy his night and since that would be the last one he decided to change a little the dynamics he was wearing and decided to choose a lucky man to take it up and give it a small personal show, still moving sensually she swept the illuminated area with her eyes and all around the center was Andres looking at her, she stopped suddenly and he with a face of hatred and his crystallized eyes only came out of there with his friends who were impressed when they saw her, they would never have imagined that disaster at night, Estela ran out and put on her coat alone and it was the fastest thing that her heels allowed her behind Andres but when she arrived at the parking lot they had already left.


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The days passed and of course the wedding had been cancelled by Andres who, because he didn't have any appointments for his wedding, had left town for a few days, Estela kept calling him and leaving him messages asking for the opportunity to explain everything, he only saw the screen of his phone and didn't remember her but the men who saw her as a piece of meat including his own friends, which he imagined was only his, he was exposed to everyone and he couldn't forgive all that lie of life he was carrying, He returned with his head cold and she kept calling him when he entered his house and he saw her sitting at his table with his cell phone in his hand and asleep, he could tell that he had had as bad a time as he had, when he saw her he realized that he loved her as he did before he saw her in that place or even more carefully and he placed her in his bed he looked exhausted and although he was hurt he deserved an explanation he went to sleep in the other room and when he woke up the next day he saw her on the edge of his bed with breakfast done and tears in her eyes, "I'm sorry I lied to you, I've never been with any other man and it was just an escape from routine for me, something that made me become someone else and feel adrenaline in the moment but I love you and that was the last night I would do it please forgive me, I love you" said Estela in tears, he looked at her wanting to dry those drops that fell on her beautiful face but she should defend her position and not be so easy, "Not only did you deceive me but you went to that place and you felt full of men imagining any amount of morbidity with your body half naked, you didn't respect me Estela and I can't forget that overnight, I'm sorry and even though I love you this is a wound that won't heal soon, Please close the door on leaving and leave my keys on the table," she said with regret at each word and entered the bathroom closing the door, Estela cried and when she could not take her things and when she left she closed the door feeling that the act ended her happiness.


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Wow...Wow....Wow LOL, I loved it. I hung on every word. Very well done :)

Well done! It doesn't pay to have a double-life, does it? Not to mention ruining the trust of a loved one. Very sad.

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